the notorious teacher mrs fang

Once upon a time in a quiet wood, there was a school for mice. Every class was happy and had nice teachers. Except for one class. Year 8 who had to deal with the nastiest, cruelest and shoutiest teacher, with mrs Fang. “ Here!” Said a mouse with a green puff of fluff she held around. “ okay, time for math!” Mrs fang shouted. They moved out of their tutor class to their math class. Except one was too busy reading. Ive almost finished this chapter!She thought, the small mouse was reading a book called the detonate.

“ okay math class” she heard Mrs Fang say. “Grab out your pencil cases and books!” um, I sit here” she looked behind her and saw a giant year 10 mouse behind her.

“Sorry!” She squealed like a pinkie (baby mouse) she sat up.

“Um, Talulah why are you still here!?” Mrs Fang shouted.

“S-sorry” she stammered like a pinkie again.


In the hallway Talulah noticed her friend Beatrice sitting waiting for the crowd to pass. “Hi Beatrice!” Talulah bounced.

“ I seriously don’t care if Im late for class. I m not going through that crowd!” Beatrice muttered.

“I hate mrs fang, I wish we had a nicer tutor teacher.” Talulah squealed in her most annoyed mouse voice.

“ wait.. don’t you have-“

“MATH OH NO IM LATE” Talulah ran across the hallway to door L9.

“Hello Talulah! Seems like you’re a bit late but that’s ok!” Said her math teacher miss Jinx. One of my favourite teachers. Talulah thought . “But if you’re late 3 more times I might have to give you detention.” Miss Jinx warned.

“Okay miss jinx” Talulah replied.

“Okay, today is a test sheet” miss Jinx said giving out test papers. “Don’t copy or cheat!” She warned. Miss Jinx was a fluffy squirrel. It was an algebra test to see if they remember from year 7 and 6.

And done! Talulah put down her pencil. She waved to her friend next to her called Izzy. Izzy just finished to. She was the mouse which had a green ball of fluff to comfort her. There was 2 minutes till the test was done. They had been friends since they were young.

“okay! Put your test papers down! I’m gonna take them in!” Miss Jinx took the test papers off the tables.” Time to go to your next lesson!” Miss Jinx announced. Sadly, Izzy and Talulah had different lessons

“Bye!” Izzy waved to her best friend. Why do I have to be with Mrs fang for reading. Talulah sighed. She walked to door H9 and sat in her spot.

“ Okay class grab out your pencil cases we’re doing a test.” Mrs fang commanded. Talulah grabbed out her red and white spotty pencil case. She undid the zip and rummaged through it looking for a pencil. Oh no! I don’t have a pen! Talulah panicked. Luckily, she sat next to Beatrice her best friend.

“Psst! Can I borrow a pen? You always have extras.” Talulah whispered. Bianca nodded and grabbed a pencil. Before she could give it to Talulah, Mrs Fang snapped into action.

“No pencil I see.” Mrs Fang snapped vigorously.

“ I-I-I promise it will never happen again!” Talulah squeaked like a pinkie.

“ It better not!” Mrs fang showed her sharp shiny teeth to Talulah and Bianca. The two mice shivered with fear. Suddenly, they heard Raya, an orange mouse ask Maya, the white mouse, for a pencil in an outdoor voice. Beatrice put her tiny mouse hand up.

“Yes Beatrice?” Mrs Fang asked vigorously.

“ Raya and Maya are talking and asking for pencils” Bianca pointed at them.

Mrs Fang walked up to Raya and Maya. Well…. Almost. She smiled at them and passed them. Raya glared at Beatrice and lipped out the words “snitch” Anger filled within the tiny mouse as she held it in.

“Times Up!” Mrs fang said. Every mouse handed in their sheets of paper.

“ How many tests are there gonna be!?” Talulah muttered.

“Silence!” Mrs Fang glared at her with an angry face.

“ Sorry miss, I didn’t finish” Raya admitted in a soft voice.

“ Me too” Maya added.

“ It’s okay!” Mrs Fang replied softly. Mrs fang held all the paper tightly with her grip. Suddenly, the fire bell rang. “Everyone! Outside!” Mrs exclaimed but the fire had already reached the class. It burned with bright colours. “Oh no! My tail!” Mrs Fang cried. Everyone had ran off but Talulah. “Talulah! Please! Can I take your hand!” Mrs Fang cried like a fox cub.

“Sorry? Are you borrowing Something from me?” Talulah snapped. Mrs Fang was about to reply but shut her mouth. “You taught me not to give Something to someone if they don’t have it!” Talulah gazed at Mrs Fang as she burnt. Her fur and body began to disintegrate into embers as Talulah watch the fire go over her like a blanket. A ball inside her body felt regret and guilty but her heart felt joyful and freedom. She ran outside to the grass.

“I-I was too late to save her!” Talulah lied.

“No!!” Raya and Maya both fell on the floor. They cried and rolled around like a pinkie in a tantrum.

“ Beatrice, can we talk privately?” Talulah whispered. Her mouse friend nodded. They went to a place behind some ferns.

“I-I-I let Mrs fang burn!” Talulah blurted out. Silence filled the air except for the bleak sound of Raya and Maya crying.

“Wooohoo!” Beatrice jumped around and did a little dance. “ You, me, Izzy and Abigail should have a party at my house” Beatrice jumped.

“Sure!” Talulah replied as the two mice walked off into the distance...

-Tilly